Really great writing. This place is still interesting, and I am just curious about what will happen with Colin and his ghouls.
However barely 12 pages...That was just tooooooo short, not enough to hold my interest. If this was a serial with scheduled installments, I would be more into reading further or waiting for all of it to come out, and read together. This was just not packaged in a way that will hold my attention, and as good as the writing is, thst's just a shame.